I wish there was an tutorial how to make stuff like this (mostly the plucks and basses)...
I've actually wanted to make some tutorials for quite a while now, but I don't have the time to set it up. When I come back in August, I might have some time to make a tutorial. Check out my youtube page then. If I havn't done it by then, I probably won't be able to get around to it.
I can't see myself dancing to this, it just has no hooks to grab on.
The bass drum is cool, but the other sounds feel like hiding somewhere behind the drums. The intro instrument sounds quite cheap. You could try more sawtooth trance leads and bass.
Well what would you classify this song as?
The intro piano sounds like that because I filtered to mak it sound cheap. d:
I tried different saws and bass, but they don't sound good with the mellow pads and piano. Thanks for the review.
Nice clubstyle intro, eventho you could have made a melody intro too, as you didn't make a clubstyle outro to it.
The background sounds in the breakdown are awesome, you could have used some other instrument instead of piano tho. The trance gate is made well, the sound of it is great, but notes it play could be better (atm its playing tititii tititii tititii tititii tititii tititii tititii tatataa tatataa tatataa tatataa tatataa tatataa tatataa tatataa etc, it could play more like tititii tititii tititii tititii tetetee tetetee tototoo tototoo tatataa tatataa tatataa tatataa tetetee tetetee tututuu tututuu and so on, if my "easy explanation" helps at all).
The filter effects and arps are fine, I like them, and the mastering is well made.
Continue making trance :D This is awesome first attempt.
What a cool review man, thanks a lot.
Your easy explanation made my day XD
This is great. I guess the drums could be a bit louder, the bass drum is quite weak.
The drum rolls stuff things are awesometastic just like the main melody too.
The intro is great, got me really easily into the song.
The "surprise" part thing sounds cool too (:
Thanks! I'm guessing you didn't use headphones when you listened to this? The drum bass should sound a bit more powerful if you do. If you did use headphones however, then I guess it's just my personal taste you're hearing =p I don't like it when my drums are too heavy, so that's why I tend not to make them too loud.
Thanks for the review!
Some transitions between things would be nice, the fade out fade in in 0:38 was quite weird, just like the ones in 3:47 & 3:55.
The melodies could change more too, the lead stuff you have first time in 0:13 is awesome, but you could change it a bit every now and then.
Also, it doesn't feel like this song is going anywhere, it's just standing there and trying these few things. Not a bad piece at all tho (: Just needs some variation and better buildups/transitions.
i've come to realise this isn't my best piece of work, and yes, i do need more variations in my loops and music. but thanks for the review, i'll be sure to get everything improved in my future songs.
...yeh, nothing to complain.
Had to listen it few times, it's so lovely (:
Awesome once again
I am quite sure I've heard the melody from 0:32-0:42 in some other your song.
Great nevertheless (:
Ah you've probably heard it in my 8-Bit song "Desert Train".
This song was made before desert train, and i used this melody in it
because i thought it'd fit into the 8-bit song perfectly =]
I love the melodies :D
Awesome melodies, eventho drums could have been better.
Yarr, just can't get enough of these melodies...
true story: right after I posted this song, I listened back to it and went "damn! I forgot to vary the drums! THE HIHATS SOUND THE SAME THROUGH THE ENTIRE SONG!!!"
you'll hear that it's true :p
I... just... love... the... melodies!
Plain awesome, just like Chaoz Airflow and Chaoz Fantasy :D
Awesome tribute for ParagonX9 (:
Glad you like it! :D
Soon there... (:
Cool videogameish sounds in a trance song (:
I really wonder what those zero bombers are thinking when they rate down stuff like this (:
It could use more more stuff in the background tho, it feels quite empty every now and then.
Stupid zero bombers.. I really hate people like that..
Okay.. Thanks for the contructive critism..
My songs always sounded quiet in the background..
I don't know how or with what i should fill it..
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